PLANNING: DRAFTS OF ADVERT
DRAFT 1 FEEDBACK
POSITIVES:
- image of the diamonds is good
- colours compliment each other well
- colours compliment each other well
NEGATIVES:
- album/artist name?
key information missing
artist image?
does not compliment the digipak
DRAFT 2 FEEDBACK
POSITIVES:
- typography more consistent and relevant to artist/genre
- colour scheme works & compliments digipak
key information present
NEGATIVES:
- not enough gold in typography
- song outlines are too faint
- all space has not been used
From the drafting process we have received critical opinions from a person experienced in media which fine-tuned our connotations to genre characteristics, mise en scene and theory.
Excellent evidence to show that drafting has taken place within your group to create the advert.
ReplyDeleteI am sure your group has more drafts to include here?